FREE ESSAY ON ELDUC IN 2000

ELDUC IN 2000

Eliduc In 2000
Sarah DeMoranville
Prof. Gardner
Ancient World Ren.
Love in 20th century is entirely different from when Marie De France lived. In her time,
she wrote a sweet story of two women who love the same man, Eliduc. He leaves his wife,
Guildeluec to go fight in another country even though she is devastated by his decision.
During his excursion he ends up with a younger woman named Guilliadun. The two fall madly
in love. Ultimately, Guildeluec detects the affair and behaves with not a shread of
jealousy or desire for revenge.
The way she tells the story is surprisingly peaceful considering Eliduc lies to both
women. However, my version of Eliduc, is written in 2000 mode. The society has
metamorphosed into a chaotic blend of moral dysfunction. Many are unwilling to mend
broken relationships. Instead, they choose to lie, cheat and deceive those who have been
faithful and true to them. The repercussions of these betrayals are far more nauseating
than Guildeluec's reaction to Eliduc's affair. Beware, if you loved Marie's version this
might be too intense for some readers.
First, the names of the characters are a bit more modern than the monograms Marie used.
Now, Eliduc is called Eli, Guildeluec is Gail and Guilliadun is Jill. Here is how the
story goes in 2000.
Eli and Gail were together all through high school. They eventually got married because
their love had grown into a bond of true friendship and love. The two-shared happiness
but Eli would focus the majority of his time on his career. Gail accepted Eli's ambition
and never really gave him trouble about it. She had enough to do between work and home.
Besides, Eli was a good policeman. He always took pride in his work and the chief always
favored him. He treated him special.
One day Eli came home from work exasperated because some of the other guys on the force
were jealous of Eli. He told Gail they told the chief I sell and use drugs! I can't
believe this, now the chief wants me gone. 
Gail said, oh sweetheart, we can work this out. Things will be fine. We have enough money
with my salary at the hospital to last us until the chief comes around. I could even ask
some of the other nurses if I can pick up another shift 
Eli answered, I am going away for a while. I got a job offer in the South. Gail shrieks,
what do you mean? You know I can't leave this hospital because of my contract. You're
just going to take off on me?
He says, I love my work and if that bastard does not appreciate my services; I'm going
elsewhere. I'm sorry because I know this will be hard on us but I promise I will be true
to you, Gail. I love you.
I guess there is nothing I can say to change your mind, she says. I'll be here when
you're ready to come home. I love you too. 
Gail sobbed as she walked away, not because Eli was abandoning her but the feeling in her
stomach felt inexplicable. For some reason she sensed a disastrous situation coming. Gail
yearned for the ache to go away, but it lingered for weeks.
Eli arrived in the South and the new chief had not recalled talking to him about the job.
Aggravated, Eli told him I will go to another city and fight their drug war if you don't
want me. 
The chief welcomed Eli because the city had an immense drug problem. Suddenly, the alarm
sounded in the station! There was an emergency; a riot had broken out in a dangerous
section of the city. There was a shortage of officers on duty. Eli jumped in a cruiser
and sped off to find the violators.
At the scene, blood was everywhere. People were screaming and crying. The protestors were
spewing vulgarities at the policemen. Eli witnessed two officers go down, and many of the
other cops hesitated to break up the chaos. Eli took action and planned a route to raid
the rioters. It worked. Eli attacked the leader; scrambled, fought, and clubbed the drug
dealer until he was under Eli's control. Since Eli apprehended one of the biggest drug
dealers in the city, everyone on the force praised him. Actually, the chief was so happy
he wanted to celebrate that night by having a party.
There were numerous people at the party. Eli met what felt like a million people, but
only one face stuck out in his mind. Her name was Jill and she was the chief's daughter.
The chief was powerfully strict with Jill. That was his only baby girl, so naturally he
was protective. Despite the chief's keep safe attitude, Eli couldn't stop thinking about
her.
Subsequently, Eli called Gail because he felt guilty about his straying thoughts. When he
heard Gail's voice on the answering machine he did not feel anything, no longing,
sorrow...nothing. He was kind of relieved because he did not want to hear how downhearted
she was. Worried, he started to think of the promise made to Gail. Soon afterward, he
crawled into bed thinking about how good Jill looked.
The next day, the chief came up to Eli and told him Jill would like to go on a date with
him. Ecstatic inside, but not showing it, he accepted. Later that night when Jill called
him he felt the butterflies flying around his stomach. He thought of the last time he
felt that way for Gail; he tried to recall the feeling but he couldn't.
Jill asked Eli to wear something nice because they were going out on the town. When Eli
picked Jill up she looked stunning. He felt like his whole body went numb and his heart
had melted inside his chest because of her loveliness. On the other hand, Jill took one
glance at Eli and she was swept off her feet. 
Later that evening, after dinner, Jill wanted to go to a bar to have some drinks. Eli
decided the bar was a good idea. The whole time the two of them were fixated on each
other. Gail never once entered to Eli's mind. He decided that Jill was his true love.
After a few too many drinks, Eli and Jill went back to her place. Jill invited Eli in and
he went without a single hesitation. 
That night they made passionate love and decided they had to be soul mates. Eli had never
felt so good in his life. Things couldn't have been better. Subsequently, the two
lovebirds spent every free minute they had together. Their love was indestructible.
During the next few months they felt like they hand known one another forever and their
intimate connection became stronger. Eli and Jill both believed in their undying love,
yet he had left out one small detail...his wife back home! 
Gail has been tossed to the back burner and has felt the heat because Eli was cold and
distant. He never called her; and when she called, the conversation would be abrupt. Gail
knew something was going on. She was not simple by any means; actually she was quite
cunning.
Later that week Jill came over to Eli's and the phone rang. Startled, Eli answered,
hoping it was a telemarketer or anybody besides Gail. The call was not Gail, rather his
old chief, begging him to come back home. Fighting the urge to say no way, *censored*, he
said he would return. He could not be disloyal; it was his duty.
After the call, Jill asked what was troubling him. He explained his situation and they
held each other, weeping and sobbing. Jill decided she would go with him and they could
get married. Eli wanted that so much but he had to devise a plan. He promised Jill he
would send for her shortly.
Scared to go home and face Gail, Eli walked in and gave her a hug and said, What's going
on? Gail freaked out calling him every name in the book. She can not believe the nerve
Eli had after all the pain he put her through. She said she wanted him out and never
wanted to see him again.
Eli was excited, he figured everything would go much smoother now that Gail was gone. So,
he decided to go sneak Jill away from her father's possession. Gail packed and got ready
with much anticipation. 
When Jill saw Eli her heart skipped a beat. She experienced a wave of passion, then saw
her entire life ahead with her wonderful Eli. 
The drive home was a long haul. They stopped often to eat, sightsee and just gaze at each
other. The chief allowed Eli some time off considering he came back. 
At one site Eli went into deep thought; he felt bad for taking Jill away from her father.
She was all he had, but he wouldn't have understood how much Jill meant to him. Then he
pondered on Gail and wondered if she had a nervous breakdown by now. Eli shook his head
expecting his conscience would quit and it did...for a while.
The moment Eli and Jill reached their new apartment, Jill fell in love with it. She could
not wait to decorate and furnish the place. Eli was happy that Jill was happy. She
mattered more than anything, even his career did. 
A few weeks later, the happy couple was settled. Jill was busy running errands and
getting acquainted with the town. As Jill had driven by a big building she spotted the
police station. She was so excited because Eli loved surprises. 
Walking into the precinct, she stopped at the desk and asked if Eli was there. The
dispatcher asked if Jill was a friend of his wife. Jill stopped short and said, his what?
Dispatcher says, yeah he's been married for quite a while, high school sweethearts, I
think. Jill continued to act as if nothing was wrong but the tears started to role down
her cheek and she ran out.
Now Jill didn't know what to do. She still loved Eli, but he had deceived her. She
couldn't believe he had a wife. She started wondering; maybe all those hang up phone
calls had been from Gail. She decided to keep the whole issue to herself until she
figured a way out of this mess. 
That minute, the phone rang, Jill answered and heard a woman's voice on the line. She
told Jill her name was Gail and she would like to talk to her about Eli. Jill asked Gail
if that she was Eli's wife and she said yes. They decided to meet at a local coffee shop.

They arrived at the same time and Gail felt a sharp pain when she saw how beautiful Jill
was. Jill was shocked this was even happening. At first, she thought Gail was going to
punch her in the face, more wisely she sat down and said she needed some answers because
her heart has been broken. Feeling sorry for Gail, she answered all of her questions.
Gail asked many questions about intimacy, passion, length of the relationship, how and
when they met etc. Jill was very uncomfortable but she figured that was the least she
could do, considering she did steal her husband. Gail was quite clever and she had
manipulated Jill to tell her everything she needs for her revenge.
That night Jill went home and told Eli that she had met Gail. His mouth dropped to the
floor. He was lost for words. He just prayed that Jill wouldn't leave him. Fortunately,
Jill truly loved Eli. They talked for hours and hours, getting everything out in the
open. They both felt closer than ever.
A few weeks later, Eli went to work as usual and Jill was reading her Bride Magazine,
suddenly there was a loud bang at the door. Jill jumped up and answered the door; it was
Gail. She said, REMEMBER ME? Frightened, Jill tried to shut the door but she was too
late. Gail pulled out a needle... Jill was crying begging her to stop, Gail just had this
insane look on her face and without blinking an eye she stabbed the needle into Jill. She
even gave it a good twist just for her own personal pleasure. Finally, Gail was at ease.
Jill was dead from the overdose of morphine and her plan was almost complete.
Leaving the needle out on the table she plopped Jill on the couch. In front of her, she
placed two more needles, a small mirror with cocaine on it, and a pound of marijuana
distributed in baggies.
Gail looked around, took a deep breath and laughed to herself: what a dumb bitch and now
Eli has nothing. They'll get him or possession of illegal substances and the intent to
distribute. I bet he'll be sorry now. Ha!. Looking at the clock she realized she'd better
jet.
About ten minutes later, the police answered a call about some screaming. Eli was
responding to the call and it was his own address! Eli drove at a ludicrous speed, almost
killing himself, which probably would have been better than what was in store for him. 
Eli flew up the stairs with two other cops. Horrified he screamed and cried, holding
Jill's delicate, pale body. All he could do was rock back and forth, not paying attention
to anything but Jill.
Next thing Eli knew, he was being dragged away from Jill and handcuffed. Then he looked
around and saw all the drugs. Eli tried to tell the cops he was framed, the younger cop
said yeah... yeah...tell it to the judge. We always knew you were a druggie. You left
your sweet wife for this junkie? Boy, what is this world coming to? The older cop said we
have to accept it...it's just not the like the good old days. Too bad huh? Yup.
See, in 2000, people experience harsh emotions and they act on them. Society has changed
into a me first society and humans do what they feel, acting on instinct rather than
rational. Gail reached the end of her rope because Eli mangled her heart. His lies caused
Gail to disregard the lives of either of these people. Jill suffered a wrongful death and
Eli is behind bars their souls were taken because she wanted revenge. 
When Marie De France wrote her story, women were demure and submissive to men. Nowadays,
women have the power and authority to take a stand. However, Jill is an example of the
horror going on in 2000. There are murders, rapes, abductions, drugs, corruption, and so
on. Facing daily ordeals is becoming a common place. Sadly, the lives of others are
constantly being traumatized. What is worse, the compassion of our world is dropping
rapidly because too much dismay is swarming in our lives. People are getting accustomed
and to not feeling as remorse. In addition, the moralistic values are sinking deeper and
deeper as the years pass. Even the president of the United States lowers his standards by
lying and committing adultery; and he's the head of our nation!
Unfortunately our society has little control for such a chaotic environment. Shamefully,
people perpetrate these misdeeds. In reality, the tale of Eliduc 2000, is a conceivable
scenario we could end up reading over breakfast some morning .
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